Status of My Manuscript
Meat Loaf’s classic 1977 song, “Two Out of Three Ain’t Bad,” aptly describes the manuscript feedback I received from my developmental editor in mid-October.
While her comments were mostly positive, the primary critique was that one of my three main characters is not “holding up her end of the bargain.” I guess having two out of three characters working “ain’t bad.” 🙂
Each draft – there have been several – of my manuscript has featured three point of view main characters, Eli (inspired by my grandfather), Lady Mary Northcliffe, and a third character which has changed from a grandson, then a granddaughter, and most recently a daughter of Eli (these changes were based upon reviewer feedback). Yet again, it’s that third character who is giving me grief. (There’s always one troubled child!) 😉
You may be thinking, “just pick one and finish the darned thing.” Trust me, I’m getting close to that. Each step and round of feedback is getting me closer, but I haven’t landed on the right solution yet. As my developmental editor is well-respected by several literary agents who have expressed interest in my manuscript, I’ve been advised to trust her judgement.
So… I’m taking some time for a little soul searching to decide whether I can strengthen that third character or should relegate her to minor character status.
A common refrain in this profession is that the difference between a published and unpublished writer is persistence and perseverance. I appreciate your patience and support as I persist and persevere.
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